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Showing posts with label teaser. Show all posts

12 April 2010

In The Blood Epilogue Teaser

The end is here. Thank you so much to everyone for reading. This has been a wonderful journey and Fragile and I are both humbled and thankful that you've trod this road with us. Without further ado, here is the final teaser:
Everyone gathered in Emmett's loft, and Rosalie and Emmett sat on the couch, her legs draped across his lap as he massaged her feet. They were the picture of domestic bliss, and only their burgundy eyes indicated the violence that existed within them.
Emmett had been teasing Rosalie about her pick for the World Series, and she was in the mood to needle him in return. "So, Emmett, you never did tell me why Angela looks at you with those big puppy dog eyes every time we visit Edward at his office."

Bella, sitting in Edward's lap on a huge blue bean bag chair, stiffened. "I think maybe Edward and I..."

"Not a chance, love." Edward laughed, tightening his arms around her waist. "I'm dying to hear this story."

Emmett shook his head. "You really don't want to know, dude."


Rosalie wasn't giving up. She straddled him, pinning him to the back of the couch. "Spill, now."
The playlist for the final chapter of In The Blood is Let It Be by the Beatles:

05 April 2010

In The Blood Chapter 24 Teaser

Wow. I can't believe we're finally here. The penultimate chapter. And after all the angst our lovers have been through, don't you think they deserve just a little more loving? Yeah, me too! Enjoy!!


“Do you have a better idea, my champion?” Her eyes were challenge and lust and black thirst, and for a moment Edward wondered if there was another hunger he should be attending to.

“I do, but you haven’t fed in some time, Isabella. I should take you out…” his voice trailed off as he saw the stubborn look in her eye.

“I told you my favorite meal was always going to be copper-haired American boy.” She pressed her body against his and he knew this was one battle he wasn’t about to fight. They would be together and nowhere near humans. She would be safe.

“It just so happens I know exactly where you can find such a dish,” he purred into her ear as his hands reached down to pull her more fully against him.

“I was hoping you might be able to help me out.” Bella arms were about his neck, pulling him back down toward her when she realized they had some place they could go and be alone. She leaned back suddenly and the kiss Edward had been about to place on her lips fell awkwardly on her neck. Not one to be deterred, he simply adjusted his angle and began to run his tongue along the soft skin of her throat.

“Edward,” her voice came out as a moan. “I want something.”

“I’m trying to give it to you,” he smiled into her flesh, not willing to stop worshiping her.

“Something else,” she giggled back and Edward straightened up, willing to play along with anything that might please her.

The playlist song for this chapter is "Let It Grow" by Eric Clapton:

30 March 2010

In The Blood Chapter 23 Teaser


Now that the rogue had been dealt with, Edward and Bella must decide how they will spend their forever. Will Edward be horrified by Bella's violent dispatching of Jane? Will their families support them or try to tear them apart?
Approaching the Cullen estate, Bella lowered her shield, hoping Edward would hear her.

I'm here. It's over.

No sooner had the words rushed through her mind than she saw Edward and Rosalie rush through the door and down the steps. Their parents stood in the doorway, warily watching the scene unfold.

Bella froze twenty yards from her lover, watching his stunned reaction as she let him see in her thoughts that the rogue was truly gone. As Emmett ran past her and into the arms of Rosalie, Bella remained in place, Aro's hand on her shoulder.

Now that he'd seen how vengeful, how calmly lethal she could be, she wasn't sure he'd still want her. She may have sworn off the hunt, but she would still kill without remorse. For him. For her father. For her new coven.

Edward walked slowly toward her, her shield still lowered to allow him to know her doubts and her nature. When he reached her and placed his hand on her cheek, she looked down, waiting to hear the reaction she could not bear to witness.
The playlist song for this chapter is "Let It Rain" by Eric Clapton.

22 March 2010

In The Blood Chapter 22 Teaser

I know you were all waiting for fragile's chapter last week as much as I was. And now we've FINALLY gotten to the promise land! Edward and Bella have hashed out the past, they've made some plans for the future, they've been reunited in the best possible way...

So what's left? Well, there is that pesky, homicidal vampire on the loose with the grudge against Bella. We'll get to Jane eventually, but for now, let's get to this week's teaser:
In less than a second Edward was behind her, pinning her back against his chest, his mouth by her ear. “And what if I want all of it, Isabella?” He held her body flush against his, letting her feel just how much he wanted her, now and for always.

“It’s yours,” she breathed out huskily, then twined in his arms to face him. Her eyes sought his out and he could see the sincerity in their burgundy depths. “Everything I have is yours, Edward.”

He leaned in and took her lips hungrily, marveling that no amount of time together was able to decrease his need for her. The opposite seemed true: the more he had her, the more he kissed her, touched her, made her cry out for him; the more he seemed to need. It was endless and he felt the enormity of it keenly. But it was a pleasurable thing; to feel so intensely again. He wouldn’t deny it for the world.

His hands roamed down her back, slipping under the waistband of her jeans to cup her body and even though his eyes were closed he could feel the electricity between them arching out all around them in reds and oranges and bright white lights. Then suddenly Bella’s lips were gone. Edward’s eyes blinked open in confusion only to find Bella had flitted over to the chair next to his desk and was pulling on her boots.

"If we start that again,” she smirked, “we’ll never get downstairs and I for one don’t relish the idea of putting on a peep show for the Volturi guard.” She walked over to his closet and tossed a pair of khakis to him. Edward caught them with a laugh.

“No. That’s certainly not something I want either.”

I for one wouldn't say no to a naked Edward peep show, but that's just me. *wink*

The playlist song for this chapter is Livin' For You by Al Green

15 March 2010

In The Blood Chapter 21 Teaser



Edward has swallowed his pride and confessed his love to Bella. In return, Bella has dropped her shield allowing Edward to see the horrors that have shaped her. What will Bella do now that Edward understands?

Wrapped in Edward's arms, Bella felt safe and complete for the first time since Adam found her in the meadow and took her life. Edward's touch, his embrace, and his lips on hers were all things she never thought she feel outside of her tender memories. Having his arms surround her, even after the horrible things she'd shown him, was surely a dream, some twisted fantasy she'd created since he found her to preserve her sanity. His gentle kisses over her face were real, though, and she slowly allowed herself to believe he loved her.

Still, there were things that needed to be said, things he needed to understand. Otherwise, they would never be happy.

Pulling back, Bella gazed into the golden eyes she'd feared for almost two centuries. "I need to tell you about your change."

Edward's eyes clouded over briefly then were bright and clear again. "We don't have to do this now."

"Yes, we do. We finally do."

Edward nodded slowly then lifted Bella onto his lap until she faced him, straddling his hips, her back against the keys of the piano.

The playlist song for this chapter is "Let's Stay Together" by Al Green:

08 March 2010

In The Blood Chapter 20 Teaser

So we've brought our lovers together. Everyone's under the same roof even. Things are looking up. And while Emmett and Rosalie are getting to know one another, Edward and Bella are finally getting some alone time of their own. But as much as they're eager to get to the fun part of their reunion, and who isn't?, they still have a few things to hash out.

“Please don’t blame Aro for this, Edward.” Her eyes were fierce as she spoke of the Volturi leader and Edward could see she cared about the man deeply. “You have to understand. He considers me his daughter and he would do anything to protect me.”

“From what? From love?” Edward didn’t want to quarrel with her but Aro’s deception had wreaked such destruction on both of their lives, had made them both so unhappy for so long. It rankled that she could forgive him so easily.

Bella’s shoulders slumped a little, wearily. “When you were in Volterra, did you hear what others think of your kind? Of those that follow Carlisle’s…lifestyle?”

Edward’s pride was pricked. Yes, he had heard what they thought of his father, of him. How they took the respect that Carlisle held for all life and turned it into something perverse, considering abstaining from the murder of humans to be an abomination. Not trusting himself to keep the rancor from his words he simply responded with a curt nod.

“Then you know how strongly other vampires feel about the way you live. When Aro realized that you were living with Carlisle, he came to Chicago to witness for himself if you were truly committed to this way of life. When he saw that you were…” her words trailed off. They both knew what Aro did next.

“And what gave him the right to decide this for you? Even if he is your sire, Isabella, you are a grown woman with a mind of your own. You don’t care that he treated you like a child?”

“Edward,” she sighed, clearly not sure how to explain her point of view to him. “Aro’s not my sire but it’s because of that, because of what he knows of my early years that he wanted to spare me the choice. He didn’t treat me as a child,” she emphasized. “He treated me as his child.”

If Aro truly thought of Bella as his daughter, how could he so blatantly disregard her free will? Edward tried to imagine Carlisle if the situation had been reversed but he couldn’t imagine his caring, loving father taking the choice out of Edward’s hands. His father had too much respect for him for that. Bella must have seen the lack of understanding in Edward’s eyes because she began to chew on her lip in worry. Then suddenly her eyes lighted with wary inspiration.

Can she make him understand? Here's hoping so! Because I, for one, am ready for our erstwhile lovers to reunite already!

The playlist song for this chapter is Bohemian Rhapsody by Queen:

23 February 2010

In The Blood Chapter 19 Teaser


Edward called her ISABELLA!!!! *squee*  Okay, now that I've gotten that out of my system, here's this week's teaser:

Standing over Edward's crumpled body, Bella was terrified. She knew what Jane was capable of; she'd seen Jane wield her dark weapons time and time again. Regardless of how Edward now felt about her, if she'd been too late to save him she would never forgive herself.

Bella fell to her knees at his side and, unable to suppress the need to touch him, brushed the disordered hair from his face. "Edward," she whispered.

Clasping her hand in his, Edward closed his eyes. She expected him to shove her away in anger, but she gasped as his soft lips kissed each of her fingertips. She'd dreamed of his lips for 91 years, of their tender touch and the electricity that resulted from it. She never thought she feel the overwhelming sensation again, yet, here she was, drowning in it.

So, if the teaser is B & E, why is the pic above Rosalie and Emmett?  Oh, you'll see...*evil grin*

The playlist song for this chapter is "Killer Queen" by...well...Queen:

15 February 2010

In The Blood Chapter 18 Teaser

While Emmett and Bella are learning just how innocent (or NOT) Angela is, Edward's getting some life lessons of his own.


This image is of an actual chair
that you can buy, should you be so inclined,
on eBay


As Edward crumpled under the weight of Jane’s torment, he barely registered being picked up and flying away from his house. Jane made sure he was incapacitated throughout the entire journey. As Jane’s torture burned through him, Edward had no way of knowing where he was being taken. His mind, normally able to focus on multiple things at once, was completely incapable of processing anything other than the agony he was in. When it stopped abruptly, Edward found himself sprawled out on a dank cement floor in a dark and musty room. His eyes fluttered open to see a tiny pair of black, lace-up, steel toed boots standing in front of him.

“Don’t move or I’ll do it again.” Jane’s voice was almost bored as she turned her back on him and walked toward a chair she had set up in the center of the room. The way the room was laid out reminded Edward of something, but he just couldn’t quite place it in his hazy state. When Jane twisted around to sit on the ornate, gold-adorned piece, it finally clicked into place. It was a throne. This dark, desolate place was Jane’s throne room. And, as he might have expected, it was but a hollow shell of the glory she sought. For a moment Edward felt very sad for the tiny child-monster before him. But only for a moment.

The playlist song for this chapter is Contact in Red Square by Blondie:

08 February 2010

In the Blood Chapter 17 Teaser


Jane's on the warpath, and Bella is on her way to Edward's office. Who does she find? Why, innocent little Angela, that's who.

Closing the distance between herself and the moaning girl, Bella winked at Emmett over Angela's shoulder. "My, aren't you a pretty little thing?" Bella cooed, threading her fingers through Angela's silky hair. "I bet you taste so sweet."

"What the hell are you doing here? Get your hands off her!"

Bella turned her head and looked straight into Edward's blazing eyes. Smirking, she tugged Angela's hair, giving Emmett access to kiss her exposed neck. "Well, hello there, Edward. Emmett and I were just playing with your little toy." She laughed as she watched his jaw tighten. "So, how did your grudge fuck go?"

Edward's eyes widened then narrowed into angry slits. "You two...my office...now!"

Bella and Emmett shrugged as they pulled away from a panting Angela and followed Edward into his office. Once they were seated in the guest chairs, Edward slammed the door soundly.

The playlist song for this chapter is "Heart of Glass" by Blondie:

25 January 2010

In The Blood Chapter 16 Teaser

So seriously...who else cheered when Bella told Emmett they were going to pay Edward's office a visit? Uh, oh, Edward! Bella's tired of taking all the blame. And let's face it...that boy has some explaining to do. Fortunately for him, he won't be called upon to account for his actions in this chapter. Well, let me know if at the end of this chapter you think he should feel fortunate, because an old 'friend' is coming to town: Jane.



That's right girls and boys, this week's chapter is from Jane's point of view. Here's the teaser...Enjoy!

Silently Jane turned, making her way back to the main part of the castle and to her chambers beyond. Upon entering them, she removed her cloak and hung it in the wardrobe that sat unused on the far end of the room. Since she had joined the Volturi over four centuries ago, she had worn their cloak as a sign of her allegiance. She had never had any reason to set it aside, not even to exchange it for street-ware, as her talents elevated her above the menial tasks that called for their kind to mingle with humans. Now the dark grey fabric was gathered on a hanger and shut away in the wooden closet. She felt uncomfortably bare without it. As she glanced in the mirror that hung on the wall nearby, she was almost blinded by the stark whiteness of her peasant blouse. Unsettled but still determined, Jane shifted her eyes away from her reflection and set about preparing for her departure.

She moved swiftly about her room, collecting the few things she couldn’t bear to part with, leaving everything else untouched. As Jane’s hand closed around the tiny miniature of her brother, she closed her ruby eyes and sighed. Her face, always so carefully blank, cracked for a moment, revealing the heartbreak and frustration of a constantly thwarted girl. For an instant she appeared as what she had once been: no more than a child, overwhelmed by the world and so very powerless in the face of those around her. A quiet, tearless sob leaked out of her mouth and she clutched the image of her brother against her, holding onto it as if it were a talisman against her grief. A moment passed and her face calmed; the tightening of her jaw the only indication that any emotions had just passed over her visage. She tucked the miniature inside her shirt, just below where her heart had once beaten, then turned and calmly walked out the door.

The playlist song for this chapter is Hell's Bells by AC/DC:
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18 January 2010

In the Blood Chapter 15 Teaser


Comfort, Munch, 1907

During Aro's story, Bella sat up in the bed, pulling her knees to her chest and wrapping herself up into a tight ball. Emmett held her, stroking her hair as she rocked back and forth in stunned silence.

"Why will you not destroy me?" she finally whispered into the phone.

"You have asked me this favor twice before: once when I found you with Adam, and once when I told you Edward had died. Do you remember my answer?"

Bella leaned her head against Emmett's shoulder. "I remember, but I want you to say it."

Aro sighed. "A parent would never destroy their own child."

Venom pooled in her mouth and sprayed as she screamed at the phone. "Yes, but a parent would apparently betray their child!"

Bella knew that, even though Aro loved her, she was risking death by speaking to him this way. Part of her wanted the freedom and peace death would give her, but it was slowly losing ground to the part that was deeply wounded by Aro's lie and desperate to find a way to overcome it. She felt Emmett's body stiffen next to her, and she remembered her existence was no longer simply her own. She'd been selfish and forgotten her protector and friend needed her.

The playlist song for this chapter is "Back in Black" by AC/DC:



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11 January 2010

In The Blood Chapter 14 Teaser


Photo by Justin Williams courtesy of fineartamerica.com

I know things are getting hairy for our erstwhile lovers and some of you are wondering if they're ever going to find their way back to each other. I'll tell you up front, that's not going to happen in this chapter. No, unfortunately, Edward hasn't hit his rock bottom yet. He has to sink just an inch or two lower into the sea of angst.

But before I give you the teaser I wanted to address the question of why. Why are we torturing these two characters? Why can't we just let them have a bit of happiness? Why do we insist on being cruel women? Good questions. And the answer, in my humble opinion, is because angst is an essential part of the narrative arch. There can be no light without dark, no love without hate and frankly Edward can't come to grips with who Bella truly is without walking down some dark roads of his own.

So he's a bit of an asshole when he's hurt. He says things he shouldn't. He does things he shouldn't. And it's not just there to yank your chain, it's because that's what real people do. At least it is in my experience. But at least working through these challenges is what allows us to grow. Right? And Edward needs to grow and in particular, grow up. However many years he's existed, he's still an 18 year old boy when it comes to romantic relationships because he's never allowed him self to experience these emotions with anyone else. And clearly he needs to work through some issues.


Who knows angst better than a 15 year old guy living out in rural Virginia?
I don't know but Justin Williams, the artist who took this photo,
definitely has my vote for best pictorial capturing of this emotion.


So....please bear with us through these next few dark chapters. We're getting to the end of the self-inflicted pain and soon we'll be moving on into the land of catharsis. And just so you know, Catharsis-ville is filled with lemons. Whole groves of them. *wink* And now, this week's teaser:

“Slow down there, Edward,” she grabbed his arm, breaking his stride as he tried to streak past her. “Who lit a fire under your ass?”

Edward shook her off angrily. “Leave me the hell alone, Rosalie,” he spat back before pointing an accusatory finger in her face. “Not one more word out of you. ‘Maybe you still have a chance at happiness,’” he sneered as he quoted her words from just a few days ago. “’Don’t you want some sort of closure?’ Ha! Closure?” He savagely dragged his hand through his hair in order to prevent himself from shaking the living daylights out of his sister. “Do you know what kind of ‘closure’ I got, Rosalie? Can you guess?”

Rose’s eyes were wide and wary. “I’d be willing to bet it wasn’t what you were hoping for.”

“And the lucky streak continues!” Edward whirled away, forcing the palms of his hands into his eye sockets as if he could somehow block out the vision of Bella entwined with her lover. “No, it wasn’t what I was hoping for,” he whispered bitterly.

So what now? You’re going to run away, then? There was no accusation in her thoughts, just regret for somehow precipitating the pain her brother was in and sorrow for how their parents would ache for him during his absence. Will you come back?

“I don’t know,” he sighed wearily. “I just can’t…I can’t be here; not knowing she’s here too.” With him, he silently added. He looked up into Rose’s eyes, struggling not to break down like a child, begging for her to understand.

Go…I’ll explain to Carlisle and Esme. She stepped aside so he could get to his car. “Just…please call them so they know you’re ok.” Don’t stay away long, Edward. Please. He saw her standing in the open door of the garage, watching him as he sped down the drive and out of sight.

The playlist song for this chapter is Wasted by Def Leppard:

04 January 2010

In the Blood Chapter 13 Teaser



Edward has found his Isabella in the throes of passion with Emmett. His discovery is has broken his heart and made him question everything he thought he knew. What he doesn't realize is that his sudden appearance at Bella's window has made her question her own sanity. Once she sees truly sees Edward and hears his words, her entire world is turned upside down.

She was haunted by Edward's black eyes, full of hate and contempt, piercing her as his beautiful mouth spewed acrimony. He called her a monster. He compared her to the man who changed her and tortured her body and soul. She tried to explain, but he wouldn't listen.

He didn't care why she changed him.

He didn't care why she left him.

He didn't care that she thought she'd lost him forever.

He didn't care that she loved him.

He didn't care, because he didn't love her anymore. The realization left her cold and empty, and she lay in the wet, grimy street, praying that the same God who'd seen fit to take away Edward's love would see fit to take away her pain as well.

When I read Pushy's wonderful last chapter, it was painful, and she told me how hard it was for her to write. After writing this chapter, I understand what she meant on a whole new level.

The playlist song for this chapter is "Bringin' on the Heartbreak" by Def Leppard.

28 December 2009

In The Blood Chapter 12 Teaser

If you haven't figured it out already, allow me to warn you now: this story is going into the dark place in Edward and Bella's relationship. That's right, there's enough pain to go around and everybody's going to get a big, heaping plate of angst. But just remember, no good thing comes without a price. In order for our erstwhile lovers to get their happy ending (and I do love me a happy ending), they're going to have to make it through the tough times.


artwork by dholl

Unlike my last chapter, I have known EXACTLY how this chapter would work from the very beginning. Let me set it up for you just a bit:

On a whim, he stopped by the park where she had found him again so many years ago. He wandered past the field with the tall oak trees where they had kissed for the first time. As he did, Edward caught the faintest whiff of something…not human. It was soft and lush like vanilla with a sweet undertone of ripe strawberries. But there was something else mixed in with it: an underlying odor of chocolate? Coffee? The aroma nagged at him. Like a sleepwalker, Edward followed it past the formal gardens, past the reflecting pond, and out onto the street and into the city again.

It led him to the heart of Isabella’s old neighborhood, only a few blocks from where her house once stood. For a moment he forgot the scent he had been following and remembered how he had stood on the porch of that house the day they had made love, how nervous he had been and how very much in love. In the thirties, not long after he had left Chicago to follow Carlisle to the Pacific Northwest, he had purchased the grand, old Queen Anne and had it demolished. It was the only time he acknowledged the anger and betrayal he had felt and done something about it. Though cathartic, it had not done much to cleanse his heart of the ichor with which Isabella’s leaving had filled him.

The wind shifted again, and the scent he had been following called him onward, past the seedy corner currency exchange with its neon sign alternately blinking “2:12” and “39˚F.” Edward barely noted the time, something that would have sent warning tremors through him normally, especially combined with the perfume he identified as Isabella’s. He inhaled deeply, turning his head up to where the aroma was strongest. He easily scaled the building and was streaking along the rooftops of the warehouses that dotted the main street when he heard her voice.

“Baby, please…come with me.”
Uh, oh.... something tells me Edward's about to see something he REALLY won't like. Oh well...

One thing I did want to mention was that the park described above (and in Chapter 5 when Bella kisses Edward) is based on Douglas Park in Chicago. It is still a beautiful place today. The following pictures were borrowed from The Jens Jensen Legacy Project.



The main park building


The lagoona


The playlist song for this chapter is The Chain by Fleetwood Mac:

21 December 2009

In the Blood Chapter 11 Teaser



If you found the last chapter beautiful and lovely (which it was - onepushyfox wrote an incredible chapter), you will have emotional whiplash after reading chapter 11, "Give You My World." While Edward is returning to Chicago to find his Isabella, Bella is leading Emmett through his first day as a vampire:

“Bella? Is it over, Bella?”

Emmett's voice was shaky and quiet, but it was a symphony to Bella. She looked into his eyes, no longer clear blue but now inky black, and she smiled.

“Yes, baby,” she said, stroking his head soothingly, “it's over. I missed you so much.” She kissed his lips tenderly.

Sitting up slowly, Emmett carefully scanned the room. “Everything looks so different.” He reached out and cupped her face with his hand. “You're even more beautiful, if that's possible. You even feel different.”

These moments were the ones she had dreamed of having with the beautiful boy. Watching as Emmett opened his eyes and truly saw her for the first time, she once again mourned the loss of her mate. Still, she was devoted to guiding Emmett through the difficult newborn years, making sure he was the perfect vampire she knew he could be. She would not fail this time.

I feel I should warn you: it's chapters like this one that give this story its strong M rating, and, like we've said before, we're so not kidding about that.

It will be posted on FFn at 12:01AM-ish on Wednesday. We are still waiting for the last chapter to be validated on Twilighted, and we hope we're caught up soon.

The playlist song for this chapter is "Go Your Own Way" by Fleetwood Mac.

14 December 2009

In The Blood Chapter 10 Teaser

So this chapter has me nervous. More nervous than the earlier Edward chapters because I feel Edward finally has to deliver in this one and he and I really struggled with how he would actually make good on his promise. Is he sweet? Sure. Angsty? Like a mo-fo! But has he ever looked back at his time with Bella fondly? Remembered it without anguish, self-doubt and the taint of betrayal? Nope.

But that's the gift that Aro gives him with his memory of Bella: the ability to see her in a way Edward hasn't since he was human. And believe me, they had great times together. They were unconditionally and irrevocably in love, once upon a time. It's just that Edward's kind of protective of that time with Bella and often doesn't want to talk about all the details I want. Finally, after much begging and whining on my part, he's consented to share some of it with me and consequently with you. I do hope it lives up to your expectations.

So first off, the tease. And before you get your hopes up, the tease contains NO LEMONS. I'm not saying there are no lemons in Chapter 10, but you can bet if there are, I'm not teasing them. You'll have to wait just like I do. Sorry!!


Bella's house in Chicago, 1918

Edward nervously straightened his tie, building up the courage to knock on the door of Isabella’s house. He could see from his reflection in the window to his left that he looked perfectly presentable: he was wearing his dove grey tweed suit with a crisp white shirt and light blue tie. His hair, always somewhat unruly, was slicked back on the sides neatly, the rest contained as much as possible under his dark grey fedora. He knew he looked every inch the picture of the perfect gentleman. So why, then, did he feel like such a fraud? He stood there frowning at his reflection for another minute when he nearly jumped out of his skin as the front door whipped open. An older woman with graying red hair and a faded work dress that marked her as a domestic stood there scowling at him.

“Are you going to stare through our windows all day, young man? Or were you planning to knock on the door and introduce yourself like a decent fellow?” The woman’s imperious tone was so discordant with her dress that Edward stood there gaping, unable to formulate the correct response.

“What, no answer?” she continued, a hint of Irish showing up in her accent as she got more put out with him. “Must be one of them mental blokes they write about in the papers all the time,” she murmured to herself, apparently deducing that Edward’s lack of verbal response indicated a deficiency in his hearing as well. Before he could inform the woman that he was neither deaf nor insane, he heard the voice that haunted his dreams drift down the stairs.

“Sadie, is there someone at the door?” He could tell from the smile in her voice that she knew it was him but was letting her housekeeper torture him just a bit longer.


A few additional notes that I think are important to the chapter:

1) Edward brings Bella some flowers in this chapter. Flowers in this era still were chosen to say things that lovers were discouraged from voicing aloud. Edward definitely chose his flowers for that reason. Here's the bouquet he gives Bella:



And here's a list of what the flowers in the bouquet mean:
Purple lilacs – first emotion of love
White lilacs – youthful innocence
Blue/lilac rose – mystery
Lavender rose – love at first sight
White rose – Eternal love, silence/innocence, wistfulness, virtue, purity, secrecy, reverence and humility
Snowdrops – consolation or hope
Snapdragons – deception, graciousness, presumption
[Note, I've purposefully left some ambiguity including all possible meanings for certain flowers. Edward may have meant one thing when he bought the flowers but retrospect often adds a touch of irony.]

2) Bella has a painting in her house, a version of Judith by Gustav Klimt. Here is a copy of it, if you're unfamiliar with the work:



And I apologize if all of these notes make the chapter sound a bit pedantic, but I promise I'm just a bit OCD on the details. The chapter won't read like a university lecture!

The playlist song is "Angie" by The Rolling Stones.

07 December 2009

In The Blood Chapter 9 Teaser



Edward is in Italy, and Bella has just revealed to Emmett what she really is. In chapter 9, "I Watched You Suffer," Bella recounts her life to Emmett:

"I was born in Georgia in 1797. My father was the county judge, and my mother was a whore who abandoned us when I was twelve years old. My father's name was Charles, and he loved me very much. When he remarried, it caused quite a scandal because his wife was half Cherokee, and we were immediately shunned. Still, my new mother was a lovely woman, and her children with my father were beautiful as well."

Bella tried her best to forget her family, the four people who had loved her most in the world and had suffered because of her. She shook her head, trying to clear her thoughts and remain focused. "In 1818, when I turned 21, I should have been married to some local boy looking to start a family. Because of my father's marriage, however, no one wanted me. I spent a great deal of time alone, reading the books my father would acquire for us. I often sat alone in a meadow in the woods near our home, reading and wondering if I would ever have a life of my own.

"One day, I was approached by a man in my meadow. He was handsome and attentive, but he made me uneasy. When I tried to return to my father's house, the man grabbed me. He tore at my clothes, exposing my neck and shoulders. I tried to fight, but he was so strong." Her words trailed off, and, for a moment, she was silent. She tried to ignore the horrified look Emmett had on his face as he finally stared her way. "I thought he was going to rape me. Instead, I felt his teeth tear into my neck and his mouth drink the blood from my veins."

Now that Emmett knows, really knows, about Bella, will he still want to protect her?

The playlist song for this chapter is "Wild Horses" by the Rolling Stones.

30 November 2009

In The Blood Chapter 8 Teaser

So when we last left our hero, he was waiting for his audience with Aro, ready to see if he or any of the vampires there know anything of his lady love, Isabella. Unfortunately, nothing is easy for Edward, is it? Yes, he gets in to see Aro, but from the teaser you'll have to ask yourself whether or not he'll be happy he did.

“Aro, you know my thoughts now, so you know why I’ve come,” he said trying to redirect the conversation to a more expedient path. Aro nodded slowly.

“Edward comes looking for his sire,” he said simply to Caius.

“What are you talking about,” his brother shot back with exasperation, tired of Aro’s show and ready to be rid of Edward. “Jane already told us that Carlisle’s mate is his sire.”

Unfortunately for Caius, Aro was just warming up. “Ah…yes. Well, it seems our dear Jane was wrong there as well.” Jane’s eyes flashed irately from Aro to Edward. Aro held up a hand to prevent her from launching into another denial or explanation. “Carlisle lied, dear one.”

Caius’s mind went ballistic. How dare that freak flout our authority? “Aro! Jane and Felix were our official representatives. They were acting in your stead. Can we allow this behavior? Is this how Carlisle repays our kindness and friendship? With lies and betrayal?” Caius’s past jealousy over Aro’s preference for Carlisle flowed back into him like a tidal wave.

Jane’s mind was no less vitriolic, although she could barely form a complete sentence in her mind. The words Hate! and Burn! pounded through her brain in a relentless litany. The only person in the room who wasn’t full of fear and jealousy and hate was Aro. I can only imagine what you’re hearing right now, he smirked at Edward.

Edward realized it was time for a dramatic stance and unfortunately it would require him to bow to Aro’s authority: publically and physically. He walked directly toward the Volturi leader, who waved back his guard before turning back to Edward. Surely you’re not going to be foolish, young one?

Edward looked confidently into Aro’s crimson eyes, then slowly lowered himself to his knees and bowed his head.

“Carlisle only did what he did because he was afraid I would be summarily executed. He had noticed the up-tick in murders as well and had been watching me, although he had no inkling of my talent. When he lied to your guard, he did so only with the hope of saving me, a stranger. Please don’t repay his kindness and compassion to me by punishing him for it. If anyone is to be punished, let it be me.” Edward continued to stare at Aro’s black, slippered feet. Please, God, don’t let them kill me. Not when I'm this close to her.

And he is close isn't he? Or is he? Well, you'll have to keep reading to find out. Mwwwwahhhahahaha!!!!

Who's evil now, eh?

The playlist song is "Breakdown" by Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers.

23 November 2009

In The Blood Chapter 7 Teaser




While Edward is in Italy trying to get some answers, Bella is in Chicago with Emmett. Emmett's wonderful, attentive, and sexy...and not the beautiful boy:

Their declarations of love the night before should have been the fulfillment of Bella's deepest desires. Instead, she was confused. Sitting next to Emmett in the dark, her thoughts of him were mixed with her memories of Edward. When Emmett was awake, Bella attention was solely centered on her lover. As he slept, she imagined Edward's mouth on hers, his hands in her hair, his body weighing down on her. She'd spent almost a century trying to forget the beautiful boy, yet suddenly, in the darkness, he seemed to be all she could think about.

Emmett stirred next to her, pulling her down and reclaiming her, mind and body. Their bodies tangled, they exploded together, and Bella looked deep into his eyes. There was love there, definitely, but it was not the bottomless gaze the beautiful boy had when he looked at her. She wanted someone to look at her like that again.

And poor Emmett, he just doesn't know what he's gotten himself into.

The playlist song for this chapter is "Refugee" by Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers.



You can find the new chapter at the same bat time (Wednesday), same bat channel (FFn & Twilighted).

P.S. And wasn't New Moon WONDERFUL? *swoon*

P.P.S. Oh, and how 'bout that Remember Me trailer?! *swoon* *thud*

16 November 2009

In The Blood Chapter 6 Teaser

Chapter six already? So much has happened. *sigh* Last time we saw Edward, we left with Rosalie telling him to get off his emo-butt and "figure it out!" Go, Rosie! And thank God Edward's not reading fragile's chapters because Chapter 5 saw Bella and Emmett grow that much closer. *queue the suspenseful music* But even though he doesn't know what's been going on with Bella for the past ninety-one years, Edward's ready to find out. And this is the chapter where he'll start that journey.

Part of that journey will take him to Alaska and the Denali clan, as you'll see in the teaser below, and I wanted to give you an idea of the house I was thinking of when I wrote this part.


Edward opted for speed over inconspicuousness and drove the Vanquish to Denali, making the over 3500 mile trip in less than a day. He called Tanya on his way to ask her if she would mind an impromptu visit from him, and she had been more than happy to hear the news. He had, of course, noted the time when he ended the call on his cell phone: 2:14 am. God damn it! He cursed. The daily reminder made Edward more determined than ever to get to the bottom of why Isabella had left him.

As he drove up the backwoods road to her home, he hoped Tanya’s enthusiasm would remain of the friendly variety. He knew she found him attractive but, even though she was as stunning as any of their kind could be, Edward had never thought of the strawberry blonde beauty in that way. Tanya had always felt like a cousin to him. As he saw her waiting for him in front of the house, on the wide flagstone patio that stretched from the entryway to the driveway, he could only hope the feeling was now mutual.

“Edward, it’s such a pleasure to see you again.” She pulled him close and kissed first his left cheek then the right. She inhaled his scent, and Edward tried not to hear her thoughts as she involuntarily wondered how he would be in bed.

Good Lord, I bet he’s got a lot of pent up sexual frustration. Rosalie said he hasn’t slept with anyone in the seventy-some years she’s been with the Cullens. That’s just far too long to go without sex. Oh, how I wish he would just let me kiss him, just once…


The playlist song is "Devil Delight" by Heart. I particularly enjoy the guitarist in this video with the crazy '70s vest that's cut to show his nipples (way to rock it out, dude!!!), although this has absolutely no bearing on the chapter itself (thank goodness for that!).



As always, the new chapter will be posted to FFn and Twilighted on Wednesday. I hope you all enjoy it.
 
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